Peer Review

This is a review of all work i have done so far...

OLDER SHOTS ARE DELETED BY ACCIDENT SO WILL POINT OUT WEAKNESSES BUT THEY ARE ALREADY FIXED BUT AT THE TIME OF THIS REVIEW THE SCREENSHOTS WERE DIFFERENT...

Peer Feedback: Madaline Abrook

Strengths:

FRONT COVER - STRONG

CONTENTS PAGE - STRONG

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD - STRONG

Suggestions:

FRONT COVER -

TOP RIGHT IS BLANK FILL IN

BANNER BEHIND BOTTOM ARTIST NAMES

COVER LINE BREAKERS

CONTENTS PAGE -

EXTEND ARTIST FEATURES WRITING

SUBSCRIPTION BOX IN LOWER LEFT

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD -

COLOUR CHANGES

BLANK SPACE BETWEEN PICTURE AND BANNER

Any other comments:

NONE

My thoughts:

I agree with all that has been said and will carry these out

Actions I need to take:

FRONT COVER -

add a graphic of a festival in blank space

add banner perhaps low opacity

add yellow lines between cover lines

CONTENTS PAGE -

lengthen artist text

add subscription box including page number and telephone number perhaps a screenshot of front cover

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD -

change colours round

add poster circle perhaps in blank space