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Feedback 16-20 Female

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The Appropriateness of the work to the audience and task was described as appropriate and fits well. There was no even better if.

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For Conventions of layout and page design, The respondent replied i think the layout is good and allows for an easy read and has all the conventions including coverlines and a masthead etc. although it would be better if there was something to fill the top right hand corner. I will try and experiment with filling this corner with varied things but have decided i think a reading festival logo with look best.

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In Variety in fonts and text size, the respondent said the strength was good use of variety and fonts and they all have the same genre, which is good as the texts connote the genre well although to make the cover lines bigger would be desirable but as the way they sit around the head perfectly they are acceptable as it looks better this way which was a struggle i faced while making the cover.

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For the accuracy of use of language and register the approriapreness was described as good and precise although the respondent believes the cover line about asking amber could be more approprite to the genre.  I like the play on words of "asking amber ask a stupid question" but will try to think of  a more serious cover line.

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The Integration of illustration and text was commented on with a  like of the banner, plus sign and yellow lines between cover lines put could be improved with a form of banner at top to compliment the bottom one. i like this idea and will attempt to put a similar banner at the top.

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